deathdancecritique

visually pleasing, however, my initial reaction was the idea of the menstrual cycle how chaotic and disturbing it can be but still maintained within a slender, delicate, whimsical woman
I also, almost immediately, reacted to it as a fashion illustration with the figures in over-exaggerated poses and the eye on the ultimate red cocktail dress

my subjective reaction to color was thrown by the deep stress of red - it can be used to enhance hunger in advertising, prosperity in the eastern hemisphere, or power as proposed in religious art work - it changed the figures to a strong, shaped, boom-pow piece of movement

I enjoyed that the only line work was to emphasize where one body ended and another began

the only improvement I would suggest would be to form the figures in a space of time or placement

question: is it one person in different movements?